Dove Commission

Its a shame about the shoulder piece, im pressuming thats part of the outfit of the character but i feel it loses its balance, though the dove almost rebalances it, i reckon if you had flipped the hair onto the other side, it would balance it.

I reckon you could of played with the border more, as it feels lacking, but with some interesting beads, and pearls and making it flow more, it would really enhance this piece.

my main issue, and possible the only one that is a big thing, is the "outline" or lack off, especially on the gloves, as they clothing isn't really shaded, so theres that lack of "3D ness" that it could have, so instead I would give it an outline, to make it more of a feature, than less of a flaw. Almost like how Alphonse Mucha does his hair, its usually flat, but the outlline makes the curls and flicks interesting.

However, the colour scheme is lovely, and the jewelery and beads are a lovely touch, you have alot of potential! So go do the best you can and be as amazing as you can!

I hope this helps you, and try not to be discouraged ect. I dont want that at all!!

Jane